nitrobenz wrote:decent mashup, instantly recognizable, but I've gatta crit a couple things.
Fist, the yellow slopes ahead of the cockpit, I wouldn't have done that (maybe just me). although I like the yellow stripes on the nacelles, the single band on the mid section seems out of place. Perhaps if the red stripe behind had been yellow to tie that stripe in, instead of separating from, the tail stripes.
Second, the N-1 wings: I feel like they're either too thick (lead edge to trail edge) or too short (body to engine) relative to the fuselage (Which looks fine). The N-1 is one of my favorites, so sorry if I'm being hard on you.
Third, not a crit, just an idea: What if you had used reverse mounted TIE Interceptor wings?
ted @ndes wrote:...Too much black didn't look right, and needed to break-it-up with some color...
ted @ndes wrote:... I didn't explain that in the description, as I didn't want to go crazy with a lengthy back-story...
ted @ndes wrote:- I absolutely was thinking the same thing about reversed TIE interceptor wings... unfortulately I was a few angled plates short to pull it off. Also thought about the TIE advanced wings too... In the end, I grabed onto the "bee" theme and stuck with the hexagon... another idea I had was to have the TIE wings articulate at and angle (so not perpendicular to the body-wing)
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