You definitely have a own style going on here. I don't like all the elements of it but the wholesome feel is very positive.
Roundish and very aerodynamic shapre of the whole ship makes it very fast looking and with the movable thrust-fins, it looks like it can maneuver itself in very challenging terrain. The front with "nosey" motor intake works nicely and makes the ship seem bit more shorter than it was supposed to be, almost like a chopped helicopter. But what you gain from the stylish shape you seem to lose a bit with rather unplanned colorscheme. Bits of reds and blues in tan, grey and black shapes don't really help to shape up the craft and thus, the ships seems like it has been made in a workshop from random pieces of other spaceships. Tighter control of colors, perhaps even losing few colors, would help a lot to clarify the shape and function of the ship. Also, that would help making those details pop out more since now many of them dissappear between contrast between surfaces.
It is a good ship but still needs bit of rework to make it really shine!